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Abstinence
Contributed by
jaavys
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Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 01:12:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Re: Abstinence
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 01:26:32 PM AEST
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| I DON'T DIG THAT THIS IS LISTED UNDER CHILDREN'S POETRY |
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Re: Abstinence
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by SAT on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 01:31:41 PM AEST
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| i didnt like it. it was way too blunt, and some of it didnt make sense. it shoulkdn't be under childrens poetry either. |
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Re: Abstinence
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 01:52:33 PM AEST
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| Sorry man this is not--PG13--it is XXX |
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Re: Abstinence
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by Kie on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 05:05:57 PM AEST
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| No this isn't childrens poetry but it is not XXX that is ridiculous. Pornographic is X. It is blunt and opionated but I thought it was composed well. It is kind of a harsh ugly view of sex but in another way it could be called true. Kie |
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Re: Abstinence
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:17:28 PM AEST
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powerFUL! excellent.
wildejohnny. |
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