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CONCEALED CLOUDS SHED TEARS ON TERRA TURF
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 08:44:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
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"CONCEALED CLOUDS SHED TEARS NEAR TERRA TURF"
Deep within the core of our grieving earth,
It's heart's convulsing, sobbing, o'er the dearth
Upheavals, unrest, tyranny, all increase
it's agony.
Concealed clouds shed tears near terra turf,
cleansing the quilty.
Wars and rumors of wars, innocent
young boys.
Why must they die? Unspeakable,
Mad Quietude?
Earth's ground receives their life's
blood sacrifice!
Where concealed clouds shed tears near
terra turf, dead bodies suffice?
A mother's mournful cry, fathers, losing
their beloved sons!
Protecting whom? Or, 'tis wishes
of War Demons?
The earth endures patiently,
no protector known.
While concealed clouds shed tears near
terra turf, no love sown.
Man is self~destructing, life is no
longer considered precious!
He's lost his way, replacing blame
with braveness.
Cancerous tentacles of war engulfing
nation after nation.
Yet, concealed clouds shed tears near
terra turf, broken hearts dampen!
Earth's heart is throbbing, earthquakes
arouse those sleeping.
Oh, Please Dear God in the Heavens,
stop their weeping!
As concealed clouds shed more tears near
terra turf, graves numbering acres!
Buried with them, their off-spring, never
allowed to be born.
Leaving their children without a father,
a mother torn.
Please guide man Dear God, from your
secure path forever...
Before concealed clouds shed even
more tears near terra turf,
hopeful comfort bearer.
Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
March 3, 2004
"What a cruel thing is war; to separate
and destroy families, and friends.
To mar the purest joys and happiness God
has granted us in this world; to fill our
hearts with hatred, instead of love for
neighbors, and devastate the fair
face of this beautiful world!"
`letter to his wife~1864
Robert E. Lee
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Re: CONCEALED CLOUDS SHED TEARS ON TERRA TURF
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 10:02:39 AM AEST
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You are a wise woman.....A family not far from me lost a son in Iraq...every day I hear of more deaths there and pray to God I dont get the word that it is my daughter who has been taken. 60 more days before she comes home. I never felt the fear and pain of war like I do now.
Very well done
Roses
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Re: CONCEALED CLOUDS SHED TEARS ON TERRA TURF
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by Kie on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 11:49:37 AM AEST
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| The title of the poem just drew my eye. The poem really made a strong point. I wish we could all live in peace and harmony, abide by the golden rule and treat the earth with kindness. I tire of war, fighting, killing etc. Loved your poem ConSue. Kie |
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Re: CONCEALED CLOUDS SHED TEARS ON TERRA TURF
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 05:19:46 PM AEST
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Will man ever learn that war only begats more war. Hatred begats hatred, etc. Man is so greedy and power driven that we are destroying our own kind. God won't have to end this world. We are doing a great job on our own. Beautiful piece of work.
Rita |
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Re: CONCEALED CLOUDS SHED TEARS ON TERRA TURF
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by emystar on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 07:18:54 AM AEST
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Very interesting wrote!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: CONCEALED CLOUDS SHED TEARS ON TERRA TURF
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by Stitch on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 09:52:38 AM AEST
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You touch people in the most memorable way. Don't ever change.
Stitch |
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Re: CONCEALED CLOUDS SHED TEARS ON TERRA TURF
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 11:02:24 AM AEST
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| Critters, this is such a sad write. It's so sad. War is a very sad thing, because it leaves families torn apart. You did an excellent job on this. Keep writing. *S* Cynthia |
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