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For you mom
Contributed by
kyle
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Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 04:15:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Its wierd how long it takes for you
to realize how great things once were,
From here today, to when i was only two
I have taken for granted the things I adore
It makes me sad to see friends leaving
What have I got now? Whats to do?
The road that I pursue seems to be weaving
My friends are determined and im stuck in glue
But most of all I miss my mom
Her smile, her charism and her love for me
She's only growing older, with wrinkles on her palms
She deserves the best but its hard for her to see
We use to set up a blanket outside
and have a little picnic under our tree
I was just a kid, but I felt so alive
I think she could see it in me
If only I would have known when i was younger
How great you really were, my tears would fall no longer
Copyright ©
kyle
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2004-03-04 04:15:29]
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Re: For you mom
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by Dawny on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 05:06:40 AM AEST
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Swet and sad, really nice write
Love Dawny x |
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Re: For you mom
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by kalika_vidya on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 05:35:08 AM AEST
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| very good poem..she must be great..K |
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Re: For you mom
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:45:09 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, the best poetry site on the net.
It's not too late to show your appreciation... Great write..
Jenni |
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Re: For you mom
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by PumpkinPie on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 12:38:54 AM AEST
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Hmmm..I found myself relating to this immensly...I tend to sadden myself thinking about the past,knowing I won't be able to go back.And like you,it seems as though all my friends are going at a faster pace than I and I'm just there slowly making my way.Know you're not the only one,I share your thoughts as well.Thanks for sharing this with us,
PumpkinPie |
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