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Better Days
Contributed by
kyle
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Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 03:27:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Another day flashes by so fast
what is there to show
Caught in a state of panic
The things we will never know
The price I wouldnt pay
To see it as it was
To be back there again
Where all is how it should be
These ideas will drive me crazy
They are with me all the time
It makes me sad to see the future
When the past is only fading
But to be back there again
The place that makes me happy
to be back there again.....
Copyright ©
kyle
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2004-03-04 03:27:43]
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Re: Better Days
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by loopylou on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 05:29:22 AM AEST
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| aw ths makes me a bit sad but i suppose thats good that your poetry has the power to touch peopkes emotions, somtimes moving on is really diffucult i know, its a really good poem |
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Re: Better Days
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 07:10:54 AM AEST
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Good write...the longing shows....
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Re: Better Days
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 08:42:31 AM AEST
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| Nice. It's a pretty sad poem, I feel you. I'm starting college in a few months and I suppose it will feel like this too. Thanks for sharing this poem and hugs to you. |
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Re: Better Days
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by arden on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 10:55:34 AM AEST
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this is sad :( but i really like it. good write keep it up.
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Re: Better Days
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 11:26:47 PM AEST
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| What a sad write. Being homesick is not the best thing. *S* Cynthia |
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