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Strawberries and Sugar
Contributed by
butterat_zool
on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 02:46:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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This is a strawberry.
Notice the bright red
that covers the gentle cone shape.
We call this sugar,
the glistening crystals
all over the sides.
Notice the light stickiness of it.
That means that there is moisture
coming out of the strawberry.
We call this cream,
but it’s really boiled milk.
It makes the strawberries taste great,
and they make the cream divine.
Now drink the cream,
and eat the berries,
and don’t you mind the part
that smells like lettuce.
There you go. Now in a few hours,
you’ll be happy like summertime
and we’ll laze away the afternoon.
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butterat_zool
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2004-03-04 02:46:48]
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Re: Strawberries and Sugar
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 02:54:06 AM AEST
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THAT'S A GREAT WAY OF LOOKING AT IT!
DAN!! |
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Re: Strawberries and Sugar
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by loopylou on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 05:33:49 AM AEST
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| wow this is good you must be very talented at picking up on inspiration. well done its nice to read somthing mellow for a change |
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Re: Strawberries and Sugar
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by Joan on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 12:02:01 PM AEST
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| sounds good ...i could just eat those delicious berries right now reading your poem... |
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