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My Testimony
Contributed by
cubby33
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Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 01:40:44 AM in AEST
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ChristianPoetry
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And there was I
In the chapel pew
I felt all alone
But there were a few
One came up to me
While I was in tears
I've never been so afraid
In all of my years
And then he asked me
"Are you alright?"
I just simply said
"I need the light"
He took me outside
And came to explain
How Christ died for me
So that I could gain
I didn't know why
He would die for me
Cause I've been so bad
That I did not see
From then I did promise
That to Christ, I'll serve
He will be praised
For the death I deserve
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Re: My Testimony
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 09:23:45 PM AEST
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Got some nice flow going but the last verse was puzzling?
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Re: My Testimony
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by emystar on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 05:58:31 AM AEST
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It's your humbleness to God for dying on the cross so u can live.
I finally found it on my own.
This is a great testimony of his luv-n-grace 4 us all.
Great job!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: My Testimony
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 05:26:26 PM AEST
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Really good. We didn't have to help you with this one.
Keep writing.
Take care.
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Re: My Testimony
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by faith_my_eyes on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 04:51:56 PM AEST
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Jacob! I never knew you were a poet! Awesome poem.
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