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Upon The Open Ocean
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 12:38:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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My heart and soul
want to be
upon the open ocean,
with not a care
in the world.
I long to be free
from this harsh,
hateful world,
I want to sail away
and be along side
the whales and dolphins.
Upon the open ocean
is where I want to be,
away from the existance
of hate among humans.
I hear and see the
same thing every day
on the news,
people getting killed,
raped and tortured.
What kind of place
is this to live?
© Cynthia Jones
Mar.3/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
... [
2004-03-04 00:38:02]
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Re: Upon The Open Ocean
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 12:54:09 AM AEST
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I SEE YOUR POINT,WHALES & DOLPHINS HAVE ALOT MORE LOVE & SENSE! THIS IS A PIECE OF YOUR HEART FILLED WITH EXPENSIVE KINDS OF HEART!! NICE POEM
GOOD GOING!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: Upon The Open Ocean
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 12:57:37 AM AEST
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| cynthia! turn off the news! take a break, breath the fresh air, ...although this is such a lovely thought, wouldn't it be so wonderful to be there right now? beautiful poem:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Upon The Open Ocean
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by venkat on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 01:43:01 AM AEST
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"I hear and see the same thing every day
on the news, people getting killed, raped and tortured." you are true Cynthia..news papers and even T.V channels bring the same horrible news..What kind of place
is this to live?..well written...venkat
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Re: Upon The Open Ocean
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 10:18:41 PM AEST
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Well, it is sad but I have taken the ostrich approach. Ever since I retired last year unless I am told I should truly listen to something I refuse to watch the news. read papers or deal with the real world. The only thing I have dealt with lately in the real world is politics and that is a nasty thing in itself. I just need to know the name of the candidate I would vote for. Then it was right back to isolation for me. I won't come up for news again until election time. LOL
Rita |
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Re: Upon The Open Ocean
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 07:07:18 AM AEST
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You are very wise, Cynthia, dear.
I rarely read a newspaper, or listen to TV.
I don't even like to talk with my neighors if they tell bloody stories about the weak.
So I fill my mind with goodness, and as long as I'm careful what I feed my brain...then my happiness takes rein.
What a thoughful poem
you're a very good thinker, keep a happy heart and from badness refrain.
Great Wrte,
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