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Away With Me
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 12:29:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Fly away with me
among the sky so blue,
float above the
puffy white clouds
just me and you.
Sail away with me
upon the ocean waves,
let the cool breeze
blow through your hair,
let the mist
from the water
powder your face.
Swim away with me
under the ocean blue,
amongst the fishes
I love being with you.
Run away with me
across the distant land,
together forever
you and I
forever hand in hand.
© Cynthia Jones
Mar.3/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
... [
2004-03-04 00:29:31]
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Re: Away With Me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 12:39:33 AM AEST
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Cynthia, this is absolutely lovely. Gosh, I wish I had someone to take along on such a trip. Beautiful piece of work.
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Re: Away With Me
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 07:01:38 AM AEST
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Cynthia I accompanied you on these lovely trips.
What a amazing piece of work you have displayed in this poem!
Lively, loving, and kind.
The last part made this whole rhyme!
"hand and hand!" was lovely
love you
consie |
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