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Open Your Eyes
Contributed by
spacecowgirl53023
on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 12:20:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Open Your Eyes.
You live,
You learn.
Sometimes,
You learn from
Your mistakes.
You learn not
To trust people.
But yet,
You still strive forward.
You go about doing so
Until it eats you away
From the inside out.
Until you find them.
That special
Person.
When you find them,
You will still strive forward.
You will still be eaten away
From the inside out.
Only,
You will have a shoulder
To cry on.
You will have a hand
To hold.
You will have an ear
That will listen
To all of your worries
And troubles.
I have found that person.
This person was always
Near.
I just never opened my eyes.
After this,
Open your eyes.
You may find them.
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2004-03-04 00:20:52]
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Re: Open Your Eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by SpazzyMcGlee on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 12:25:21 AM AEST
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| I really like your poem. I kinda know what you mean too...i dont know where i would be without my best friend. since she walked into my life its been way different too. you're a very talented writer. |
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Re: Open Your Eyes
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by spacecowgirl53023 on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 12:38:44 AM AEST
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| i really appreciate people that can understand my writing, thank you. |
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