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When I Woke Up
Contributed by
WordPoet
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Thursday, 12th September 2002 @ 06:06:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
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When I woke up this morning, I could only think of you,
Our bodies locked, your lips so soft, the moments quickly flew.
I looked so deep into your eyes and memorized your face,
And gently with my fingers your features I did trace.
An angels body soft as silk, you stayed within my arms,
It’s here I want to stay forever, entranced by your sweet charms.
Yet when my eyes were opened, you were nowhere to be found,
My longing heart has tricked me, you never were around.
And so I’ll look inside myself and tell you what I see,
There’s a longing, loving part of me just dying to be free.
Am I just a lovesick fool, who cannot see the light,
A blind and desperate joker, a cupid without flight.
I can’t deny my passions depth, the feelings are to strong,
Yet hiding them is a habit now, they’ve been locked away so long.
So in my mind my dreams comes true a secret to embrace,
And always there, when I wake up I’ll see your smiling face.
By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by Suzy on
Thursday, 12th September 2002 @ 06:27:19 AM AEST
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Awesome write Doug....your poetry is filled with so much passion and longing....love it....
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by Lia on
Thursday, 12th September 2002 @ 07:54:01 AM AEST
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| talk about a fierce desire for love....awesome job |
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 12th September 2002 @ 12:12:29 PM AEST
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Wow!! I absolutely love this....... You are displaying a lot of talent here, Doug.. Keep it up..
Jenni |
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by MisterRight on
Thursday, 12th September 2002 @ 02:18:32 PM AEST
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Doug, you've amazed me once again. This is beautiful... you have amazing talent. You should think about trying to get yourself published.
Curtis |
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by Sweetie on
Friday, 13th September 2002 @ 10:46:11 AM AEST
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This is an amazing beautiful poem and it touched me cuz your words explain exactly how I feel. It even brought tears to my eyes cuz it's the truth...Take care
Sweetie |
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by princesspurty on
Sunday, 15th September 2002 @ 09:21:02 AM AEST
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| very beautiful! so sweet!! |
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by juliette on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 02:13:24 PM AEST
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Doug,
What a masterful piece - honestly the best I've read so far..... Somehow, I was shocked at the end to find it written by a man! I can't wait to read more of your work......
juliette |
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by WordPoet on
Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 12:51:47 AM AEST
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juliette said, "Somehow, I was shocked at the end to find it written by a man! "
Unfortunatly I can completely understand this reaction but it happens once in a while. I am a hopeless romantic, loving what I can't have and living for every moment I can share with my dream made real. But there are times when the one I dream of is not around and so I close my eyes and see them there. This is what this poem is about. My longing desire for the one I can't have, my aching and longing that brings to to a place where I can share a moment with the one I love until once again reality crashes down around me and I am forced to realize that my dream was just a dream and the one I love a star out of reach. |
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by rustygrl33 on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 04:29:26 PM AEST
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| thats really good!! hehe cant say i havent done something like that before |
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by barbara312 on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 05:32:10 PM AEST
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| This is so passionate .Your feelings stand out strong. Very good . |
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 04:33:54 AM AEST
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Wow. You've bested me.
did you write this from personal experience, or did it come about spontaneously? |
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by WordPoet on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 08:48:30 AM AEST
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| I feel that everyone has lived this feeling at one time or another. A lot of what I write is based partially on experience and partially in creativity. I try to blend the two so that it is easier for everyone to relate to. |
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 08:40:56 AM AEST
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| i know exactly what you mean ... but i don't think i could have said it as beautiful as you did... wonderful job... i loved it. |
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by PrincessPage on
Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 03:27:36 PM AEST
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| i like it because i could relate i think about my crush all the time and i think the way you have expressed that is very passionate. |
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by One_L on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 02:37:24 PM AEST
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| I Love your poem Doug, its awesome! Your very accurately described the way many people feel when they have passionate feelings for another! Your writing is great!!! =D |
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by arthur1210 on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 12:32:20 AM AEST
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| I cannot do anything but agree with previous comments...An accurate expression of feelings millions hav felt...Well done, thanks for sharing |
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by PumpkinPie on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 01:56:29 AM AEST
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Oh my ! What a gorgeous poem ! Thanks for the lovely read,
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by dead_beauty on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 09:04:07 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem! Great job! :)~ravenghost |
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by lovesucks on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 08:11:34 AM AEST
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Awesome, very expressive I truly enjoyed this, and have felt like this for a long time now. One day you'll find that one true love. Very Good, thanks for sharing
T |
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by miss_leadin_lady on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 04:31:36 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed your poem! |
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 05:56:54 PM AEST
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| tremendous work. i can really relate to this. |
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by Jane_Doe on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 12:32:51 AM AEST
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| I can relate so much that I might just cry... Really, that was so sad an touching. It was so well written and I just have to read it over. I loved it. |
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by lovesucks on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 12:21:10 PM AEST
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Awesome, so completely true, intriguing....magnificent
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by Shnannon on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 12:47:59 PM AEST
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| wow...that's all i can say to describe this. it's amazing |
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by jheng on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 02:35:38 PM AEST
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| great poem. i love it |
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by candysears on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 05:41:57 PM AEST
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I know you have received many comments on this great write...I love the way your word
Flow....This is brilliant....God Bless! |
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by dalamar on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 02:59:37 PM AEST
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| nice write I love it keep it up. |
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by Twinkle on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 12:55:32 AM AEST
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..it was my dream....nice selection of words...
you are really talented
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 03:45:55 PM AEST
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Nicely nice, I feel as if I'm reading a mirror.
Ok ok, to be precise, I feel as if I'm reading my own description.
Really Really nice.
You wrote the right feeling. Well Done. |
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by candyistoo-sweet on
Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 02:50:02 PM AEST
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| lalala lovely! |
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by Ambivalence on
Thursday, 4th February 2010 @ 07:57:02 PM AEST
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this flowed so beautifully...
"Am I just a lovesick fool, who cannot see the light,
A blind and desperate joker, a cupid without flight."
I gotta respect the depth of those lines. excellent overall.
take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: When I Woke Up
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by brialuv on
Sunday, 20th June 2010 @ 07:08:39 AM AEST
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| this is an amazing write filled with so much passion and emotion ! |
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