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One Beating Heart
Contributed by
vampy
on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 10:52:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Lullaby whispers,
sweet caresses,
smooth, soft skin,
getting lost in you
feels beautiful.
Love-filled smile,
adoring kisses,
sleek and swift,
your lips entrance me
in harmony.
A nibble here,
a playful bite there,
seeing you,
touching you,
my knees feel weak.
Our love is pure,
full of truth,
bursting with care,
our hearts belong
together as one.
Copyright ©
vampy
... [
2004-03-03 22:52:54]
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Re: One Beating Heart
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by doug on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 10:56:55 PM AEST
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| ahh reminded me of my last girlfriend and the feeling i had when she was near. thanks for the memories, your friend doug |
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Re: One Beating Heart
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by desire on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 11:22:14 PM AEST
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| thisi s really really nice, and i agree it does brieng back old memories...slr |
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Re: One Beating Heart
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by SpazzyMcGlee on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 12:28:06 AM AEST
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| you have a very unique writing style. I like it. your poem was beautiful...i can almost feel what you're feeling through the words. |
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Re: One Beating Heart
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 01:02:01 AM AEST
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| a lovely breath of sweetness, great style and flow:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: One Beating Heart
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 02:49:34 AM AEST
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THAT'S GOT A SWEET KIND OF BEAT TO IT!
WRITTEN REALLY WELL,TOO!!
DAN!!! |
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Re: One Beating Heart
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 10:01:48 PM AEST
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I like the sound of the words to describe your bliss.
Perfect little bit fluff.
Whisper |
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