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chalk heart
Contributed by
merry
on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 10:48:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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_________________________
splattered on the sidewalk
chalk heart
dust blown away
hopscotch
i lost
my turn
to play
rain came
washed it all away
waiting for another
turn
^^^***^^^***^^^***
make a wish
copper penny
carried my dreams
for me
when i believed
^^^***^^^***^^^***
pretended it didn't matter
paid for the sin
a hundred thousand
times over
hell knows
where i live
brittle skin
shatters
dust blown away
^^^***^^^***^^^***
make a wish
copper penny
carried my dreams
for me
when i believed
gmm 2004
Copyright ©
merry
... [
2004-03-03 22:48:12]
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Re: chalk heart
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 11:05:36 PM AEST
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| Gosh, I really really liked this one. Hopscotch was so much fun and there is so much truth and wisdom with a touch of sadness in this poem. Awesome. Kie |
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Re: chalk heart
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 10:23:09 AM AEST
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I felt a great sadness in this....and expressed in a way only you can. Ya know I'm here if ya need an ear.
Roses for my daisy
Larry |
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Re: chalk heart
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 10:19:06 PM AEST
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I can feel every word of this. Good stuff.
Stitch |
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