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I Pity You At Last
Contributed by
faithmairee
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Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 08:47:55 PM in AEST
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i pity you, at last
my estranged man
but do confess
that each morning
i awaken with a prayer
upon my lips that God
looks mercifully upon you
and gives you happiness
health and much success
in the midst of all
the hell i find myself
entombed in being
at your side i still
wish for you every
good thing i would
want for myself
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faithmairee
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2004-03-03 20:47:55]
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Re: I Pity You At Last
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 09:12:32 PM AEST
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I truly liked this.....very good emotional write
Well done
Roses
Larry |
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Re: I Pity You At Last
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 10:09:29 PM AEST
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| You have a giving heart and a great outlook. I really enjoy reading your poems you have a way of getting right to the point but leading the reader to wonder where the next stanza is heading. Very talented you are. Kie |
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Re: I Pity You At Last
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by doug on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 10:37:08 PM AEST
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| your quite amazing to me for it seems most people despise their ex. however you wish yours happiness . you are a wise and kind spirit. great poem and great attitude , your friend doug |
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Re: I Pity You At Last
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by ammalu on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 06:13:39 AM AEST
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| good expression - good heart - keep it up. |
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