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Blind Spot
Contributed by
outdoorsman
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Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 08:16:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The sea of anger is rising
my soft words have slipped away
all that is left is piercing screams
these devil's are pulling my emotions
and choking away my stability
what will I chance to spare my life?
where can I hide to renew my smile?
will everything I love slip away?
Does life ever feel beautiful,
or does the stench of disaster stay?
sunshine has left my face now
rain has disguised but every tear
so leave me out of your thoughts
I don't exist in this pretty world
I will go on as a blindspot in your plain view
Copyright ©
outdoorsman
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2004-03-03 20:16:15]
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Re: Blind Spot
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 08:23:44 PM AEST
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| Good write. It's very well done. I especially like your descriptions. Hope to read more from you! |
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Re: Blind Spot
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by twinkletoes on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 08:28:47 PM AEST
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i do not have to guess with this one, been looking forward to a newy from you. glad you didnt let e down...good write.
Twinkletoes! |
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Re: Blind Spot
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 10:14:52 PM AEST
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| Oh yes, you're descriptions define the poem. Brilliant write. |
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