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LONELY SOUL
Contributed by
positivelypurple
on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 08:10:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Little boy
All alone
Has no place
To call his home
A lonely soul
Smashed at midnight
Smoke another bowl
Drink another drink
The pain won’t subside
And he pushes those
Who love him aside
He lives in fear
That people he loves
Will disappear
Consumes more chemicals
Trying hard to cope
This is one of those nights
He has lost all hope
Desperate, lost
Worried about everything
And nothing all the time
He feels his life has
Little reason or rhyme
Sharing his bed
Another random Jill or Jane
He hopes a new love
Will make him sane
She does not succeed
He ushers her out the door
He still can’t find
What he is looking for
The years fall at his feet
He has to stop living in the past
Only then will he be free
And this little boy will become a man
At last.
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2004-03-03 20:10:26]
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Re: LONELY SOUL
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 10:25:52 PM AEST
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| Great poem on self struggle. I'm glad it ended with hope. :) |
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Re: LONELY SOUL
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by emystar on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 08:37:10 PM AEST
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I can tottally relate to this write.
Don't know how I've been missing your writing as it's amazingly strong, with much purpose.
Luv your style as u get rite down to the nitty gritty.
Very powerfull writes u have here.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: LONELY SOUL
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 11:26:44 AM AEST
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beautifully written in both style and flow... i also love the story aspect:)
love n' hugs nessa |
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