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how it works inside
Contributed by
callistonynaeve
on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 08:08:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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you drive me crazy,
it's hard to think
i get so angry,
i can hardly blink
my mind is an awful mess
it gets that way when you enter it
why must i suffer so?
can't you control yourself, just a bit?
sometimes my anger consumes me,
i scream as i run, as i fall
it's times like these, i am some what glad
imagine what i'd have said if you did call.
you almost force me to bottle it up inside
cause the anger and pain to hide
but it isnt your fault, is it?
it's just me, swallowing my pride
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Re: how it works inside
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 03:37:11 PM AEST (User
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i try and write everything in lower-case, probably for that same effect you wanted... i like this one. almost sounds like you want to explode right now! good writing! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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