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the touch
Contributed by
ilhsa
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Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 07:13:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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That smile that you show
that playful touch you give me
you show me love in away that you shouldn't
when we where alone the touch I reciveced
from you made a shiver go through my body
when your soft lips brushed mine my world
became real compaired to every thing else
the touch is wrong to them but right to me
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ilhsa
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2004-03-03 19:13:49]
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Re: the touch
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by LornyaNarFuinenya on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 07:18:16 PM AEST
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| weel hun if he makes you happy thats all that counts..anywho..nice poem ;) have a good day and be careful..;) |
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Re: the touch
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by Lionel on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 07:59:02 PM AEST
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Sweetie, you should really take time to edit out errors, in spelling, in your poems.
Other than that; you write well. |
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