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Dont!
Contributed by
lil_angel
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Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 05:52:46 PM in AEST
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My hope is fading
I feel all-alone
I don’t want lectures
I don’t want a sermon
I only want a place to rant
My dreams are clouded over
I feel so hopeless
Don’t you lecture me
Don’t you give me a lecture
I just want to be heard
I am screaming so loud
But no one hears
Don’t turn this into a debate
Just hear me
Just care
March 1st 2004
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lil_angel
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2004-03-03 17:52:46]
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Re: Dont!
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 06:30:38 PM AEST
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He always hears and cares. He doesn't mind if you rant, and He won't lecture, but slowly help you to see the best answer. I love the things you write at 3 a.m.
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Re: Dont!
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by LornyaNarFuinenya on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 06:54:15 PM AEST
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| I HEAR YOU!! GREAT WRITE you can pm me if ya like dearie!! I get lectures all the time too and they are TIRING AREN'T THEY??? have a great day!! |
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Re: Dont!
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 07:33:05 PM AEST
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It's amazing whay you can come out with at 3am! good write.
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Re: Dont!
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by SpazzyMcGlee on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 12:35:41 AM AEST
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| i liked your poem. i can really identify that and i like that. you dont hide your meaning at all and i like that too. i think its great. |
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Re: Dont!
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 03:58:54 PM AEST
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ooh.. ive soo been there.. good write :)
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Re: Dont!
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 03:15:59 PM AEST
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Clouds and dreams--I understand the combination of those two items!
Excellent , interesting write...very crisp and to the point. Maybe it's because the emotion is similar to feelings I've had recently, but in the crisp writing the emotion comes through. Nice!
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Re: Dont!
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 03:57:16 AM AEST
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Another good one.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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