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Hawk Him and Hawk Her Jestřáb on a Jestřáb ona
Contributed by
Aika
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Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 04:53:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Hawk him and hawk her
Together plough the skies
he flies up and she flies down
but can´t separate their love
hawk him and hawk her
both in love
softly touching the wings
when they fly
hawk him and hawk her
sharp eyes inspecting
see the other´s heart beat
bills kissing
hawk him and hawk her
lost amongst the rocks
all you hear is echo
of crying hawk woman
he is caught in draw-net
whining, yelling
she is on the other side
can´t hear him
amongst the rocks
piteous cries
no doubts
they both died
hawk him and hawk her
amongst the rocks
only feather of them flying
they both died, they were in love
Jestřáb on a jestřáb ona
Spolu brázdí oblohou
Nahoru on a dolů ona
Avšak oddělit se nemohou
Jestřáb on a jestřáb ona
Zaláskovaní
Lehce dotýkají se křídly
Když spolu létají
Jestřáb on a jestřáb ona
Ostrým zrakem se prohlíží
Vidí druhého srdce tepat
Zobáčky se líbají
Jestřáb on a jestřáb ona
Ztraceni mezi skalami
Je slyšet jen ozvěna
Plačící jestřábí ženy
On v zajetí ptačích sítí
Sténá, křičí
Ona na straně druhé
Svého milého neslyší
Zní mezi skalami
Žalostný křik
Že oba zemřeli
Není pochyb
Jestřáb on a jestřáb ona
Mezi skalami
Peří jen z nich zbylé poletuje
Zemřeli dva, z lásky…..
Copyright ©
Aika
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2004-03-03 16:53:49]
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Re: Hawk Him and Hawk Her Jestřáb on a Jestřáb ona
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 07:58:59 PM AEST
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| aika, unique, so sad yet lovely, excellent insight and style, ...and now they fly above rainbows? i would love to see you write more along this thoughtflow, its captivating:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Hawk Him and Hawk Her Jestřáb on a Jestřáb ona
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 02:40:28 AM AEST
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Oh how tragic, like Romeo and Juliet!
Sad ending to a beautiful Loving pageantry!
I could see it all in my "mind's eye!"
Wonderful Aika,
love you
consue |
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Re: Hawk Him and Hawk Her Jestřáb on a Jestřáb ona
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 10:36:34 AM AEST
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A beautiful yet tragic love story, told in an unusual way, yet so characteristically your style.
Thx for sharing
steve x |
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