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This World, Our World
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
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Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 03:13:49 PM in AEST
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DarkPoetry
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Self inflicted restraints
Devils behind every alien eye
Charred remains of this burnt down town
Acid rain falls from the sky
Grow your fingernails and sharpen your teeth
Take a bite at the world and watch it bleed
Hatred and anger oppress liberties
Feel the earth’s tremor beneath your feet
Darkness is staining the light
Wars are defeating the peace
Angels are locked in bloodied cells
Us demons upon them do feast
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2004-03-03 15:13:49]
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Re: This World, Our World
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by arden on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 03:17:51 PM AEST
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hell yeah!! that rocks charlotte. really dark and so good. wow!! about time you posted lol
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Re: This World, Our World
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by kailadragon on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 03:20:35 PM AEST
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Awesome poem!!!! very dark and dangerous, but so true about the world today......awesome write!!!
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Re: This World, Our World
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by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 05:41:26 PM AEST
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if a moderator happens to read this, please could you change the spelling of "oppresses" to "oppress"? thankyou.
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: This World, Our World
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by Lionel on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 07:53:12 PM AEST
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Look on the bright side, I know it's close by.
By the way: with a handle like yours- how many times have you been quoted, that moronic statement of FDR, "all you have to fear is fear itself?" |
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