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I know
Contributed by
TheVarsh
on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 01:57:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I know you have to leave now
I know they say it's wrong
I know that you still love me
I know that love is strong
I know how hard it must be
I know that you have cried
I know that when you told me
a part of you had died
I know that we will both live
I know that we still care
I hope that when you come for me
Our love will still be there
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TheVarsh
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2004-03-03 13:57:32]
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Re: I know
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by Lionel on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 03:18:50 PM AEST
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| Good rhyme. |
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Re: I know
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by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 04:08:45 PM AEST
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Sad but pretty poem.. i too like your use of rhyme..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: I know
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by jc_92024 on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 04:11:34 PM AEST
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was good i like
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Re: I know
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 04:21:55 PM AEST
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Persistently poignant, and says enough in twelve lines for it to be succinct and descriptive.
Good write. |
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Re: I know
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 08:08:47 PM AEST
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i will always be by your side, i will always be by your window
even if they say we cant survive
i will return to claim our future |
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