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Taking A Day Off From Life
Contributed by
intelectualpoet
on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 01:13:37 PM in AEST
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Taking A Day Off From Life
I see the seemingly endless crowd,
Of people,
Who run around like worker ants,
Just trying to make it in the world.
And here I sit,
With coffee in hand,
Watching, as the stress flows out of my body.
A smile forms,
Slowly at first,
But the emotion forces it out,
Until it overwhelms my entire body.
Oh how I wish everyday was like this,
Nothing to do, yet I can do anything.
Because I have taken a day off,
A day off life,
And in doing so,
I have given myself a new outlook on life.
Won't you join me???
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intelectualpoet
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2004-03-03 13:13:37]
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Re: Taking A Day Off From Life
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by doug on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 01:45:50 PM AEST
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| dear poet, a great job on this poem, i'm glad you got a day off and was able to come here and contribute your poerty. poetry doest follow routine for it is a free spirit . you never know when its gonna come to you. or at least thats my experience. anyways good poem your friend doug |
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Re: Taking A Day Off From Life
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 02:58:27 PM AEST
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Loved the words expressed so well
Great poem
Must take a day off from life and book into a health spa sounds wonderful!
You have encouraged me now lol
Love sweetangelukxxx
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Re: Taking A Day Off From Life
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 04:03:54 PM AEST
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Good write.....glad it was productive for you.. I called in sick today as well..but didn't get any writing done..maybe bacuse I was really sick.....
Jenni |
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Re: Taking A Day Off From Life
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by SpazzyMcGlee on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 12:39:07 AM AEST
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| I really liked your poem. i wish i could take a day off life. that would be fun. it was easy to visualize everything in my mind with this. it felt like i was there. its a good poem and i think youre really talented. |
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