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Anger
Contributed by
gothicangel
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Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 09:06:04 AM in AEST
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I saw your face dear,
God, I am so glad you are not here.
Every little thing that you do,
makes me really want to hate you.
You say that I will not dare,
I really do not care.
Telling all those lies,
even though people will die.
Angels are flying on silky golden wings,
keep telling me all those terrible things.
I keep on with my pray,
that you will not stay.
My depression raises,
and that really amazes.
Even though we are far apart,
you have to know,
there is no more room for you in my heart
Astrid Elise Grov
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gothicangel
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2004-03-03 09:06:04]
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Re: Anger
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by poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 09:08:44 AM AEST
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| Im sorry that this person hurt you and you had to go through this. see and feel your pain. sorry .. here is a hug.. your a great poet.. sandy |
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Re: Anger
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 10:01:53 AM AEST
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| Yes a very good write. May I suggest you keepv the meter closer together. Keep them coming, see my latest. bye Wes... |
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Re: Anger
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by arden on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 11:31:23 AM AEST
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i love this poem.. but its sad.. great write ill be looking forward to reading more of your stuff.
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Re: Anger
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by dark_poetry2404 on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 12:09:10 PM AEST
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wow that was really good. i like the way you wrote it. i know how you feel too. keep writing.
~*~In The End Comes A Tear~*~
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