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RISE, MY LUV
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emystar
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Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 01:45:04 AM in AEST
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Come 2 me, rise, my luv
Let me kiss u in morning sun.
Come 2 me, rise my luv
Stay with me, let's have fun.
U r my knight in armor
Shinning Thru each new dawn.
Let me kiss u-n-feel your strength
On darlin, come on home.
Let's roll round in clover
Live 2 see our dreams merge.
Jus let me be your destiny
'cause darlin, got that urge!
Your inner beauty still shinning
Even tho your bodies not strong.
Nothing else matters
'Cause in your arms I belong!
By
Emy Star
Copyright © Emy Star
Inspiration: reading Rob's fantasy writes, also the other great poets on this planet...I learn so much from you'll!!!!
emy
Poem Number: 11280
Copyright ©
emystar
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Re: RISE, MY LUV
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by twinkletoes on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 01:54:32 AM AEST
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Very nice, 11280! Wow, good going.
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Re: RISE, MY LUV
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 06:14:57 AM AEST
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wow..very nice..Your inner beauty still shinning through this verse...venkat
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Re: RISE, MY LUV
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 12:35:01 PM AEST
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| WOW!! |
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Re: RISE, MY LUV
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by 13Hopes on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 07:45:52 PM AEST
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Great write my friend, 11280 poems... Keep writing, i enjoy your work...
Cheers,
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Re: RISE, MY LUV
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by desire on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 11:30:47 PM AEST
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| this is nice you are quite a talent ..i like this alot...slr |
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Re: RISE, MY LUV
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by hidden_dezires on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 06:00:57 AM AEST
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| I LIKE THIS , ITS A GOOD READ...KEEP THEM COMING.. I LIKE THE FANTASY THING ....HD |
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