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My Feelings Of Depression
Contributed by
carebear
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Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 01:39:04 AM in AEST
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The sky is black,
Angels are dying,
All these people I've left crying,
Vocies"end yer life don't cause more pain"
I feel my heart been stepped on bruised purple and blue,
Nobody sees the scars I've kept on,
My weakened body draining from depression,
No more expressions they've been erased
I'll leave without a word,without a trace,
Stars are bleeding,
The sun is melting,
I've been named the unknown soul,
Been tripping over others problems fallen off their hearts,
Today I won't rise I'm drowning in my tears,
Come tonight tears of sorrow,
I won't ever see the daylight of tomorrow.
©Care
"04"
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carebear
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2004-03-03 01:39:04]
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Re: My Feelings Of Depression
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 02:44:21 AM AEST
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| This is a great poem....so sad....but so good! |
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Re: My Feelings Of Depression
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by doug on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 03:03:15 PM AEST
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ive been lost in depression for 10 years now
and although i cannot fully understand your pain because each person has a different experience of it , i do have a slight insight into whats going on. i hope for our sake that tommorrow is a better day. a great read , your friend doug |
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Re: My Feelings Of Depression
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 07:26:22 PM AEST
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| wow.... what an amazing poem. I'm sorry you're so sad, I can definately identify. Your poem is just, extraordinary. Good job, I haope to read more from you! |
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