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Nowhere to run
Contributed by
JadedExistence
on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 10:28:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Fear filled thoughts
Terror filled dreams
Nothing in this world
Is what it seems
On the surface
Everything is bright
But underneath it all
Nothing is right
Minute after minute
Day after day
All the time wishing
It wasn't today
I go to bed
My heart full of sorrow
My mind consumed
With fear of tomorrow
In the middle of the night
I sit up screaming
My eyes are blind
My mind still dreaming
When I awake
I'm trembling and scared
The nightmare I saw
Has my mind ensnared
I fall asleep
For a few more hours
The hope I have
The fear devours
I get up in the morning
Knowing my life is done
Can't find anywhere else
For my mind to run
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JadedExistence
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2004-03-02 22:28:43]
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Re: Nowhere to run
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by mysg63 on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 10:50:14 PM AEST
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| lot emotion, i liked it. keep writing |
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Re: Nowhere to run
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 11:22:01 PM AEST
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I'm going to echo the previous comment... I like it ... it's got emotion... keep writing
~Donna~ |
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Re: Nowhere to run
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by perfection on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 01:14:56 AM AEST
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| This one is good. It seems like you spent a lot of time on it trying to make it just perfect, and it worked. You did a really good job on describing. |
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