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Don't Belong
Contributed by
poet_of_anger
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Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 09:43:09 PM in AEST
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You were wrong
I don't belong
To this world to this life
Heaven knows I tried
You tried to make me believe
That I really meant something
Well now I have been told
That it was all just a joke
You were wrong
I don't belong
To this world to this life
Heaven knows I tried
You had started to make me think
That I wasn't a daft geek
You had told me I was nice
But now see I have fallen through the ice
You were wrong
I don't belong
To this world to this life
Heaven knows I tried
You tried to make me see
I could do anything and please
But then I've fallen to my knees
And I no longer know what to think
You were wrong
I don't belong
To this world to this life
Heaven knows i tried
You told me someone cared
But that person's disappeared
But I still tried to believe
That my life has meant something
You were wrong
I don't belong
To this world to this life
Heaven knows I tried
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Re: Don't Belong
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by dark_angel_of_poetry on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 11:31:07 PM AEST
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Very nice. I'm guessing that this is a person that you love. It seems that we have been through a lot that is similar. I also have someone that has set me up to think that I was important. I also like the line
You tried to make me see
I could do anything and please
But then I've fallen to my knees
And I no longer know what to think
This is amazing. Love this line. I also love this line.
You told me someone cared
But that person's disappeared
But I still tried to believe
That my life has meant something
This was a great poem and I hope you keep writing more. WELL DONE. |
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Re: Don't Belong
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by jbrow on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 10:23:11 PM AEST
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I like the way that this song flowed. it sounds like something srait from your heart
great write
p's
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Re: Don't Belong
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by Lovingangel4u on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 03:52:03 PM AEST
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The irony of this is while you feel you don�t fit in, half the people in the world feel the same�(as I do)�. Some would say we are not of this world but of the next.. couldn�t that be the reason some feel this way, because there is more?
Take Care
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