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Eternal Smile
Contributed by
ZeroCool
on
Wednesday, 11th September 2002 @ 07:23:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Dreams shatter
Like a mirror's
Broken glass
Thoughts and fantasies
Never more to last.
Shards lay
Upon the dusty ground
Memories and love
Lost upon the wind
Quickly fly away.
Blood pools
Next to the head
Near a hand
With a smoking gun
A shell falls to the floor.
Eternal smile
Upon a bloodied face
Laughing at those
Who brought this disgrace
The herse goes mile after mile.
Tears fall
Upon the wooden casket
Frowns upon the pale white face
A dirt clod thrown
Another life, ended.
By Kenneth Williams
Copyright ©
ZeroCool
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2002-09-11 19:23:03]
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Re: Eternal Smile
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by WordPoet on
Thursday, 12th September 2002 @ 05:40:46 AM AEST
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| Grim and unfortunately realistic. Well written, keep up the good work. |
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Re: Eternal Smile
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by ZeroCool on
Tuesday, 17th September 2002 @ 06:12:27 PM AEST
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| Most of my poetry has a realistic tone to it. I choose not to right many grim poems, many of them have sent people into tears just reading them. |
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Re: Eternal Smile
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by Sarah22 on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 08:43:24 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem |
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Re: Eternal Smile
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by wordsy on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 10:02:46 PM AEST
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Another mothers' son
comes under the gun
in the games in life they play.
nice read,
wordsy. |
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Re: Eternal Smile
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by ZeroCool on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 02:37:35 AM AEST
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| So is yours ;) |
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