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Song of the Broken Hearted
Contributed by
forever_lonely
on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 05:28:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Enveloped within, this cascade of time
Developed upon each whisper and rhyme
Caressing each flower, pregnant with fear
Suppressing each sound, void of ones ear
Broken minds crumble, like walls of my heart
Spoken through pictures, your end is my start
Season come past, each one a new feeling
Reasons persist, for the lack of my healing
Obsessing takes over, rising in fire
Repressing each flame, lost to desire
Bribing my feelings, my weapon is age
Scribing each word, emotions on page
Sleeping they lie, my slumber is long
Weeping like rain, lay dormant my song
Her essence had vanished, nothing more but to hide
The day that she left, is the day that I died
Copyright ©
forever_lonely
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2004-03-02 17:28:08]
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Re: Song of the Broken Hearted
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by faith_my_eyes on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 05:38:12 PM AEST
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| Beautiful expression of love, and a heartbreaking lament |
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Re: Song of the Broken Hearted
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 05:46:29 PM AEST
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Geez, pull the still-beating heart from my chest and throw it against the wall! Melancholy work, great expression of your feelings. Luke, how do you do it?
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: Song of the Broken Hearted
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 06:09:28 PM AEST
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| Bittersweet, yet beautifully written ... Jan |
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Re: Song of the Broken Hearted
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by fallen_eyes on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 07:35:31 PM AEST
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wow and just to think u wrote that at interact! ur talent seems endless luke, you really do seem to get the reader into an intense understanding in all of your poems, but this is truely great.
love ya T xxx |
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Re: Song of the Broken Hearted
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 11:12:57 PM AEST
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oooo! luke! excellent poem, written with style, grace and a powerful ending! hugs n' love nessa
@->>->- |
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Re: Song of the Broken Hearted
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 10:45:55 PM AEST
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| Really sad, it tugged on my heartstrings. |
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Re: Song of the Broken Hearted
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by arden on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 07:53:48 PM AEST
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beautifully written. i love this. great job keep it up.
Ardeb |
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Re: Song of the Broken Hearted
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by Empty_Soul on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 09:10:47 AM AEST
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dude,...awesome...nuff said. lol really great poem, love the simple rhyme scheme, worsk so well, so much emotion once again.
keep on fighting
never stop writing
John |
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