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Rant and Rave
Contributed by
lil_angel
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Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 05:11:49 PM in AEST
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You rant and rave
Telling me to love
But you don’t love me
You rant and rave
Telling me to do this and that
But you don’t stop to ask how my day is going
You rant and rave
Telling me to look on the bright side of life and smile
But you don’t stop to ask why I am crying
You rant and rave so much
But you don’t have to rant and rave anymore
For last night I killed myself
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2004-03-02 17:11:49]
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Re: Rant and Rave
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 05:27:28 PM AEST
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It did make me think... i liuke thought provoking writes... good job! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Rant and Rave
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by justinblue on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 08:14:15 PM AEST
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| very good I like it |
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Re: Rant and Rave
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 10:36:16 PM AEST
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| Good job. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Rant and Rave
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 12:52:19 AM AEST
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Hi, my lil angel; the poem is good and even though you say it is just a poem it still makes me unhappy to think those thoughts would even enter your head. Nothing and nobody is worth losing your life over. There are people in the world that would be distraught if you were not part of their world. O.K. I am through ranting and raving. Still friends?
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: Rant and Rave
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 09:24:58 AM AEST
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| This was quite thought provoking. You gave me something to think and ponder on. Very well written. Kie |
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Re: Rant and Rave
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 08:33:44 PM AEST
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| Awesome poem! & you succeeded, I thought (which is a very hard thing to do at times, lol) I liked how repetitive it was. It was also very true. Good work, keep it up! |
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Re: Rant and Rave
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by emystar on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 01:06:00 AM AEST
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Sad but does make one think.
Reminds me of my ex but he wasn't worth me killing my self over.
good work.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Rant and Rave
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 10:50:35 PM AEST
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| powerful write. very true concept and how it plays out. |
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