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Killing me
Contributed by
gothicangel
on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 04:05:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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All what the eyes can see,
all that we could possibly be.
You can touch whatever you want,
though we know that I can’t.
The worst thing you could really do,
is making me fall in love with you.
You know you make me fly on golden wings,
I wish you knew what problems’ loving me brings.
There is got to be an easy way,
Oh God, please tell me why.
I always make my loved once sad,
I hate myself for being that bad.
I just want to lay down and see myself cry,
why do I have to live on this kind of lie?
Just watch me; I will carefully die……
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Re: Killing me
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by arden on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 04:10:13 PM AEST
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oh yeah this is soo awesome!! i loved this. it was so good. great job and ill be checkin out more of your work
Arden |
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Re: Killing me
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by Kellros on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 04:13:46 PM AEST
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Great poem... my advice would be...
LET IT OUT... people nowadays are to hard on themselves, let it out, even on your own...
you are making life worse for yourself by keeping it in.. eventually it will show and the rest of the world will take affect on your decision too...
sometimes i think i think to much... oh well, good poem :) |
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Re: Killing me
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by wooly on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 08:23:47 AM AEST
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| nice poam |
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Re: Killing me
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by whisper-of-night on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 12:04:09 AM AEST
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| Is sounds like you have some sort of problems that pulling you back from love, although I can't quite figure out what it is, but anyway, if he is someone worth it, then just go for it! Love is not something you will find everyday! |
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Re: Killing me
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by poetrygodslove on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 10:15:13 AM AEST
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| awee.. wanting to be good to all. and finding that sometimes it dont work out. wanting to reach out and say ok but then other times it hasnt worked..... good write.......sandy |
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Re: Killing me
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 02:27:42 PM AEST
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Hey, whenever you're feeling down, remember that better days WILL come. If you can't hope in anything else, keep a deathgrip on hope. Never let it out of your grasp.
Take care.
David |
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