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What's Wrong With the World
Contributed by
kailadragon
on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 03:24:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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When a 5 year old
kisses the newborn baby
it's cute
when the 18 year old
kisses the 13 year old
it's trouble
when someone takes
another life
they get a year or two
with parolle
but
if you get chaught
smoking weed
you get life
without parolle
and I could've sworn
the ten commandments said
Thou Shalt Not Kill
I must've been wrong
war, terrorism, murder
killing every day
What's wrong with the world?
Copyright ©
kailadragon
... [
2004-03-02 15:24:59]
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Re: What's Wrong With the World
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 03:30:20 PM AEST
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I've got 100 answers to that question, and well probably none of them would help... and yet still the question will bug me some. good write, made me think a lot on things... ;0)
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Re: What's Wrong With the World
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by Dawny on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 03:54:35 PM AEST
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I agree, the world is a mess...great write
Love Dawny x |
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