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Just You and Me
Contributed by
James_Forest
on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 02:32:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When I'm with you, it seems
Life is a dream
I wish it could be
Just you and me
You're free to go with anyone
And right now you're not with me
I wonder if you know
I wonder if you can see
That I like you, no, I love you
I know that's a strong word
But you've got to believe me, Please receive me,
As much as it sounds absurd
Copyright ©
James_Forest
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2004-03-02 14:32:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Just You and Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kellros on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 02:38:25 PM AEST (User
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not bad... but it seems very light in the sense of almost not real love... just like when someone likes someone else allot.... guess it might be the beginning of love... but it's to light love :-/ |
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