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Razors r Good!
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 02:19:41 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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noise fills my head, around me,
i try to block it out but i can not!
i keep feeling angry inside me,
nothing can hold back this, "gun-shot!".
a sudden shoot of feelings, shoots through me,
leaving pain pulsing through my veins,
not much is in me right now that is caring,
not much will make me happy!
not much will stop me,
from slashing my skin!
not much will help me,
to feel good within!
nothing is here,
as strong walls around me!
nothing will be here,
that doesn't destroy me!
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deathdrop
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2004-03-02 14:19:41]
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Re: Razors r Good!
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by Kellros on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 02:24:08 PM AEST
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| you are very passionate about suicide and hurting yourself... not the greatest passion to have, but atleast you have sum :) |
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Re: Razors r Good!
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by Dawny on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 03:58:12 PM AEST
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Good poem, not sure about your inspiration, but its very emotional and angry. If I was your teacher I would ask why you feel the way you do.
Love Dawny x |
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Re: Razors r Good!
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 09:43:53 PM AEST
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If I was your english teacher and saw you writing the above poem, I would go home happy that I have brought that writing out of you. All be it on a subject of that nature, but you have got your thoughts onto paper beautifully.
Well done you, well done your english teacher.
Twinkletoes! |
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Re: Razors r Good!
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 04:07:15 AM AEST
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just 2 let all you out there that think i was meant to do be doing writting, that i wasn't. she kept shouting at us because no-one was listerning but i don't think she notest me, i was only sitting 2 rows from the front.it didn't make much difference though.and just as well to!
i was thinking about talking to some one about me last night, before i get worse i mean. but it's not that easy. i don't trust that anyone WON'T pass it on and let it be pushed through the system! and i don't want people to say that i'm cracking up, or things like that. and it's really hard for me to talk about my problems anyway!
has any one out there got any suggestions??
i really need help! |
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