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moving on

Contributed by desire on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 01:07:49 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



as i sit here i can actually say,
my love for you is slowly dying away.
iv loved you more than half my life,
even had fantascies of being your wife.
no matter who came in to my life my heart always longed for you,
but that was something i had to go through.
finally our paths crossed and my dream was reality,
finally after years it was you and me
you were all the man that i hoped and imagined you'd be,
we fit together like a glove perfectly.
you made me feel like no man ever could,
and i loved you like no other woman would.
the little family thing was all good at first,
but soon the bubble began to burst.
the drugs that came with that part of your life was too much for me,
arguing and destruction was not my envisioned destiny
love doesn't make you sad and depressed and praying for a way out,
and in the end that's what my life was about.
through all the drama the lovin was Yes! like all that,
but it couldn't and wouldn't change the fact.
that to stay with you would drive me out of my mind,
and i couldn't keep ignoring all the signs.
it went from love and joy to pain and sorrow,
from making ends meet to starting to borrow.
i could stay and be miserable and just get through the day,
or i could pack my bags and step away.
you're still doing the same old things you were doing two years ago,
and i cant go through that drama any mo.
it takes more than love to make a relationship grow,
there's trust, honesty and communication you know.
without those things we are living a lie,
simply going through the motions of getting by.
maybe i have out grown you and now is my time to advance,
and as much as i love you IM taking the chance.
to leave while there is some sort of understanding going on,
about my decision to move on.
it wasn't easy me walking away,
but it was just to hard for me to stay.
IM on another path going forward it seems,
i have hope for a future, i have my own dreams.
you want to run the streets and stay a mess,
i cant live my life in that much stress..
i wish nothing but good things for you.
i wish that we could of made it through.
but life has its own way of letting us know,
when we should stay and when we should go.
I will love you always and I want you to know,
I will carry what we shared in my heart where ever I go.





Copyright © desire ... [ 2004-03-02 13:07:49]
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Re: moving on (User Rating: 1 )
by uchendu on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 01:16:38 PM AEST
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Just to let u know I visited


Re: moving on (User Rating: 1 )
by Kellros on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 03:01:58 PM AEST
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i'm sorry... that's why truth and trust should be the fondament of any relationship... appreciated it, thanks :)


Re: moving on (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 04:37:18 PM AEST
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You have written an incredible poem. Deeply moving to me. My heart goes out to you.... Kie


Re: moving on (User Rating: 1 )
by desireemiote on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 07:24:16 PM AEST
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I love the poem but remember that you're trying to capture life. One thing about life is that it doesn't always rhyme and flow perfectly. Don't confine yourself by trying to just make each line rhyme. Try some freeverse. Trust me. You'll like the freedom of the results.
-sushi
ps thankx for reading my poems. I really appreciate it.


Re: moving on (User Rating: 1 )
by uchendu on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 12:51:27 PM AEST
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Listen to your fan and friend DESIREEMIOTE..and what is said is well said.. on here u treated me to a time u want to only remember and not be in.. I learnt the lessons with you and i felt the way u felt because the poem carried me along.. it's message is a gospel of what true love should be and what false love is.. well done DESIRE.. well done.. and always listen to the comments of your fans.. also always try to comment on their works too.. u will learn alot just like they are teaching us here..


Re: moving on (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 07:07:19 PM AEST
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I am very very fond of your work.... this is beautiful.... another masterpiece... well done! :)




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