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Then lover
Contributed by
jonteD
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Wednesday, 11th September 2002 @ 01:26:25 PM in AEST
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If you ever want more from me
Than weekends of outrageous lust,
Glorious sex for free,
Hours of playing with my bust.
Then lover I'm yours!
Wanna have fun all the night,
Take me home, make me smile,
Do it good, do it right,
Treat me to life in style.
Then lover I'm yours!
Buy me clothes, only the best,
Dress me up like a dogs dinner,
Miles and miles better than the rest,
In my makeup like a sinner.
Then lover I'm yours!
But don't dare ask me to stay,
In married life like normal,
As for me a ring, no way,
If you want me to be formal,
Then lover I'm gone
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jonteD
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Re: Then lover
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 11th September 2002 @ 01:45:04 PM AEST
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Hi Jonte...nice seeing you posting again... especially with such a sensual one... one question tho... is it hard??? :>)
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Re: Then lover
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by jonteD on
Wednesday, 11th September 2002 @ 02:05:20 PM AEST
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Hope we are talking about the poetry being hard here! Yep, it is becoming very hard but as I grow older so I become more angry with my efforts and try too push. I've always written notes on the PC and then joined them together to make whatever. Now though I seem to be trying to plan. The net result is that I have about a dozen or so half finished poems and stories that will never see the light of day.
The best writing is surely done in one feel swoop, from the heart as well as from the head. Opinions from all would be more than welcome.
Mind you, writing at four in the morning doesn't help much either! |
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Re: Then lover
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 11th September 2002 @ 09:16:32 PM AEST
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| Of course, the poetry!!! What else!! lol... Stick to it... Jenni |
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Re: Then lover
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by chatabox on
Thursday, 12th September 2002 @ 04:25:58 AM AEST
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Too old!!!..never. If I can post my scribbles then anyone can.
I so loved this....tell me, who doesnt want to have fun all night.
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Re: Then lover
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by spice on
Friday, 13th September 2002 @ 09:14:34 PM AEST
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I see you have not lost your touch. You work hard, but, do not play hard. Your stories and poems are good, and you know it, and even have made new friends, but alas, forget your old. Without friends, life is meaningless, and I am quietly dying.
Vanda
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