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New Shoes - A French Pantoum
Contributed by
ramfire
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Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 11:56:38 AM in AEST
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I got new shoes and style they don't lack.
But they fit oh so tight
and I think I should take them back.
My brother says they fit just right.
But they fit oh so tight
and I think they'll make a blister.
My brother says they fit just right.
He's just mean and doesn't like his little sister.
And I think they'll make a blister
when I walk to school today.
He's just mean and doesn't like his little sister
You'll see, later I'll make old smarty pay.
When I walk to school today,
I got new shoes and style they don't lack.
You'll see, later I'll make old smarty pay,
and I think I should take them back.
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Re: New Shoes - A French Pantoum
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 12:00:19 PM AEST
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This is such a cute poem. How many pairs of shoes have I worn that were like torture machines? Lost count really. What we do for fashion!!!
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Re: New Shoes - A French Pantoum
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 12:38:12 PM AEST
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| Shoes are my weakness, so I could soooooooo relate to this poem. Bandaids is my secret. (LOL) This poem was so cute, loved every word. Kie |
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Re: New Shoes - A French Pantoum
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 12:03:59 AM AEST
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Why o why do we suffer for vanity's sake. We women are so vain. LOL
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Re: New Shoes - A French Pantoum
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 12:22:11 PM AEST
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Hi ramfire,
this is very good,
i like how you tell a little about your family. |
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Re: New Shoes - A French Pantoum
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 11:41:53 PM AEST
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| Awww, this is cute. I liked it. *S* Cynthia |
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