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Ended
Contributed by
CrackerJack
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Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 11:32:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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If I could do anything, I'd do it. It seems like I've tried everything, but you don't get it.
I guess I can't make you feel what you don't, even though it only seems that you won't.
But I've seen you look at me out of the corner of your eye. When you think of how you hurt me, do you ever want to cry?
I guess it's hopeless, I should give up already. It's pathetic how I'm holding on to nobody.
I can't keep hoping with all of my heart. It's torture, it's misery, because we ended without a start.
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CrackerJack
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2004-03-02 11:32:03]
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Re: Ended
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by arden on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 11:45:34 AM AEST
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this was so good, wow wonderfuly done. so great. keep writing.
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Re: Ended
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by little_genna on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 11:27:26 AM AEST
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this is just a beautiful out pour of emotions well done.
love and hugs
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