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A hint of Spring!
Contributed by
lowman613
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Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 10:48:51 AM in AEST
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Theres a hint of spring in the air,
I feel it in my soul,
the breeze brushing away my hair,
and animals coming out of their holes,
The sun shines on my face,
giving me a sense of Spring,
not wanting this feeling to erase,
as I hear the morning birds sing,
Children laughing from being outside,
playing like they use to,
getting the bikes out for a ride,
like the weather is so new,
Knowing that there may be a day,
that snow may come again,
but Spring will soon be here to stay,
and it wil be all of our friend!
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lowman613
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2004-03-02 10:48:51]
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Re: A hint of Spring!
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by uchendu on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 11:04:48 AM AEST
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| Your piece makes a sense of spring spring up in my soul.. you have a way with your poetic pattern.. it's invigorating.. read my song-lyrics and make ur comments |
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Re: A hint of Spring!
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 12:32:57 PM AEST
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| You are giving me spring fever! Beautiful poem, one of your all time bests. Loved it. Kie |
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Re: A hint of Spring!
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 02:28:42 PM AEST
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Lovely piece, Christina...
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Re: A hint of Spring!
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 03:43:04 PM AEST
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Oh how Springy, Dingy, Ringy....I can hardly wait. March is marching in like a Lion in Wyoming......but hopefully she will leave like a lamb! Blizzards last two days, and more on the way!
Your poem held promise with much hope.
I always wish for Spring even if I know the answer is "Nope" And soon now you will have a beautiful new Spring baby....I'm so happy for you!
love you
consue |
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Re: A hint of Spring!
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 12:07:23 AM AEST
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How lovely. Your spring will be filled with a beautiful new bundle of joy and love. It will certainly be a memorable one for your. Even though we will probably have a little more harsh weather the trees are starting to bud here in North Central Texas so it can't be too far away here either.
Love n hugs,
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Re: A hint of Spring!
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 06:43:47 AM AEST
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A lovely poem..hownice of you to say like this christina:
"but Spring will soon be here to stay,
and it wil be all of our friend!"..
blessings..venkat
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Re: A hint of Spring!
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 09:34:10 PM AEST
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| I'm hoping it gets here soon. There is more snow in the forecast for us. Great write Christina. *S* Cynthia |
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