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Fortunate Day
Contributed by
Waynster
on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 06:44:19 AM in AEST
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Like a bumble bee on a plant
Looking down at a little ant
His wings start to flutter
The ant runs to his mother
Looking back at the bee
All that the ant can see
Is the bumble be on the attack
And the ant rolls over on his back
He screeches and cries
And away the bumblebee flies
Rolling over onto his feet
The ant smiles
Because the bumblebee has been beat
Like many people
Running and hiding from the bold
After a while
This gets kind of old
I use to do this
To hide or run away
Now I stand tall
And bare what everyone has to say
Copyright ©
Waynster
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2004-03-02 06:44:19]
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Re: Fortunate Day
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by uchendu on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 06:53:11 AM AEST
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| This is a great poem.. the imagery is rich and evocative... read up some of my song-lyrics too.. I need to know how u feel about them |
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Re: Fortunate Day
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 07:09:44 AM AEST
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positive! and uplifting loved it.
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Re: Fortunate Day
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by poetrygodslove on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 07:48:43 AM AEST
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| WELL first so very funny.. and interesting read.. the lat part surprised how it ended and I still like it.. good job. sandy like to see funny poems... |
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Re: Fortunate Day
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by poetrygodslove on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 07:48:44 AM AEST
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| WELL first so very funny.. and interesting read.. the lat part surprised how it ended and I still like it.. good job. sandy like to see funny poems... |
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Re: Fortunate Day
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by desire on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 06:35:44 PM AEST
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| i think this is very good funny and entertaining with a message...i like that...slr |
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