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Earthy Winds
Contributed by
Angelic_Demon
on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 10:11:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Been walking outside,
wind blowing gently.
The smell of Earth,
relaxes me more.
Walking slowly, I
took a deep breath.
Was worth it, I thought,
after having been inside
a stuffy school all day.
I climbed over the gate,
and jumped down, trying to
balance myself with my boots.
Just about fell, and took in a deep breath.
Earth's scent came to me again,
and I grinned slightly.
It was gonna rain.
I didn't care.
Winter often doesn't allow
me these chances.
Cold winds, sometimes hard to breathe,
in the pasture lays wild coyotes.
I'm not worried about 'em though.
Sunny's up near the corn crib,
and I know that she wants hay.
Got her head stuck under the door.
Springs coming, I think,
as I laugh and push her out of the way.
I climb up, rolling my eyes at the playful horse.
Wanting that hay, more like, already eating it before I get it out.
I grab a little of it for the goats,
the trouble makers.
Athena got out of the gate today,
Had to chase her all over the place.
Now, since the goats and horse are munching on hay,
I sit down like I orginally was going to.
Near where Sunny's eating her hay,
she doesn't mind my company; just snorts at me.
I laugh, leaning against the corn crib.
Away from the fence, goats might try
eating my hair again. Now that I'm
sitting on the ground, I kick off my boots.
I ought to do this more often.
Sky's getting cloudier,
but I don't mind it.
Love it, more like.
The wind picks up my
defiant hair, throwing it in my face.
I don't mind that either.
Feels nice, blowing on my face.
Rex escaped from the yard again.
The pup runs as hard as he can towards me,
annoying Sunny, but she don't mind him s'long as he don't bug her.
I laugh when he bounds into my lap.
I pet him absentmindedly,
watching the birds up in the sky.
One lands not too far away from me,
and I just watch the red bird.
Yeah, I should come out more often.
I've not done anything like this for a long time.
Every now and then I do, it's so sublime.
Nah, I'm going come outside tomorrow.
I like seeing Nature's clouds all in a row...
it's earthy winds playing with my senses.
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Angelic_Demon
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Re: Earthy Winds
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by Merry on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 10:26:55 PM AEST
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Such a lovely write I could feel the wind too, and see all the animals playing about. What a lovely picture you painted of life in the country. And yes you should get out and do that more often.
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Re: Earthy Winds
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 10:29:36 PM AEST
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| oh, this is beautiful hon! good job! hugs n' love mom xxx... |
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Re: Earthy Winds
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by emystar on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 10:45:25 PM AEST
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Beautifull imagery!
so is Lady fawn your mon?
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Earthy Winds
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by shelby on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 11:27:10 PM AEST
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I love this vivid fun light hearted poem, I live on a ranch and your details are incredible the wind the earth the animals nothing better in this life than that even when feeling lonely from human companionship there is always a friend in nature and animals
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Re: Earthy Winds
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 11:33:29 PM AEST
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SOUNDS LIKE YOU ENJOY NATURE,A VERY
THING ABOUT A PERSON IN DEED! AT LEAST YOU DON'T TAKE IT FOR GRANTED,INSTEAD YOU CHERISH IT WITH YOUR HEART,THE SAME PLACE THAT MAKES YOU WRITE NICE POETRY!!
DAN!!! |
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Re: Earthy Winds
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 06:42:56 AM AEST
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| Aahh what beautiful imagery ... you are so lucky to live in such a nature wonderland as this ... an inspiring write ... Jan |
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Re: Earthy Winds
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 12:15:54 PM AEST
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Mara this was beautiful...I could see every part of it as you wrote of it....Why, I could even smell the fresh air... but wait...whats that odor?? Oh for gods sake put your boots back on will ya....:oP ( kids)
Roses for this one
Larry |
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Re: Earthy Winds
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 10:59:51 PM AEST
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Dude, this is awesome! I love it! Makes me miss Dean's parents' place... you're so lucky to live the way you do. I'm just glad you realize it and appreciate it. Great write!
~ Dee |
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Re: Earthy Winds
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 05:43:24 PM AEST
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Awww hun, that was beautiful! but i have to agree with Uncle Lawwy, the boots need to go on *Grins*
I told you that you should write more and i'll say it again, this was fantastic!!!
Love 'n Hugs
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Re: Earthy Winds
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by yellow_sundragon on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 05:14:40 PM AEST
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Haha! Mara!! This is the reason I always tol' ya there was a poet in ya!!! This is beautiful... wonderful... I LOVE the imagery. It's so light hearted... I smiled the whole time.
*Squeezes the goopers outta her sis*
*J* |
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Re: Earthy Winds
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by driping_blood on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 03:43:26 PM AEST
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good poem there isn't anything i can say that hasn't been said, but the only way i can see the country is to go out to my uncles house, he won't let me pet the horse though
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Re: Earthy Winds
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by Soulless on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 09:07:03 PM AEST
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It seems like such a happy and cheery write. Like you have no care in the world except for catching that earthy wind. Wonderful write that really inspires my to go outside and smell the air.
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Re: Earthy Winds
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by Thivanka on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 01:05:41 AM AEST
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| I Really enjoyed reading this one, sent a electric shock up my spine. So nice! |
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Re: Earthy Winds
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by pixie on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 12:25:24 PM AEST
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an amazing write,
pixie xx |
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