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To see through my eyes
Contributed by
Shadow
on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 09:02:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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To see through my eyes for only a day
And know your path the only way
To see souls crumble like a mighty wall
And watch as it all does fall
To look at the sky warm with the sun
Only to see your world undone
To look at your friends' smiling face
Just to seem them crumbling from the base
To look into the darkness and find the sun
And understand what it is to be done
To look into the blissful night
And thank god there is no light
To know what I do about dear life
Never to end my mournful strife
To know all that fate will damn
And know what I truly am
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Shadow
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2004-03-01 21:02:37] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: To see through my eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by lil_angel on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 09:28:20 PM AEST (User
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This is a great write! |
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Re: To see through my eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by arden on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 11:48:43 PM AEST (User
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oh yea this rocks! i love it! so good wow awesome job.
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Re: To see through my eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by icryblacktearz on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 09:45:10 AM AEST (User
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one word... "amazing" |
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