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Strip Me Down
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
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Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 05:45:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Strip me down
Lay me bare
There’s nothing left of me to hide
Candlelight
Casts shadows
That dance throughout my soul’s divide
Well of tears
Bleeding veins
Drink till you’re intoxicated
Drunk with pain
High on hate
Black heart so contaminated
Strip me down
Touch my skin
Every scar a soft reminder
Every break
Every mend
Made me just a touch unkinder
Fall apart
At your feet
Left behind one too many times
Mind abused
Heart misused
Left here with all these wretched rhymes
Strip me down
Slip inside
Acknowledge every ragged edge
Kiss my wounds
Love me dry
Talk me off this precipice ledge
Taste my tears
Bleed my blood
In too deep to cover up now
So exposed
I can’t breathe
Please let me disappear somehow
I’m stripped
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
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2004-03-01 17:45:36]
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Re: Strip Me Down
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 06:15:52 PM AEST
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Wow! this is awesome Moonlit!!
Glad I inspired :) |
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Re: Strip Me Down
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 08:46:44 PM AEST
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| oh dee, this is beautiful!! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Strip Me Down
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by Angelic_Demon on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 08:49:02 PM AEST
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| Hey, I love it. Great write. :D |
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Re: Strip Me Down
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by shelby on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 10:42:20 PM AEST
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this is great its so involved and deep it draws me into it each word! great job!
michelle |
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Re: Strip Me Down
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 01:43:30 AM AEST
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Wow, this is really good. A great deal of depth and overall talent here. This is probably my favourite i've seen from you yet.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: Strip Me Down
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 10:06:55 PM AEST
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| As usual your work blows me away! Great job! Keep it coming! |
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Re: Strip Me Down
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by bonita2689 on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 08:30:31 PM AEST
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| Omg... Is it wrong for me to be this jealous. That is so awesome. I love this piece and I can truly relate! |
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