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Lying Here Alone
Contributed by
dark_poetry2404
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Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 05:40:46 PM in AEST
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I lie here alone and
watch my life go by,
I watch all i've ever
known slowly fade away,
I live my wretched life
wishing to die,
When I know my debts
I can no longer pay,
I watch my dreams and
hopes go down the drain,
I watch my blood slowly fall to the floor as I think of all my pain,
I watch my once called
happy life turn to hell,
I think of all my strife,
Hell starts when you hear
that wedding bell,
When I wish I could end my life,
I lie here and think why am
I hear,
I lie hear and wish my life
was better,
When all I feel is pain
and fear,
I think of my horrid life
as I write this letter,
So now I slowly fade
out of sight,
Today is the day,
Now I see the light
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Re: Lying Here Alone
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 06:17:45 PM AEST
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| Wow this is sad....powerful and well written but really good! |
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Re: Lying Here Alone
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 08:41:57 PM AEST
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| Great write. I'm sorry your life is crappy right now. But don't give up! You have an excelent talent. Hope to read more from you! |
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Re: Lying Here Alone
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by wooly on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 08:53:06 PM AEST
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| i feel this always great poam |
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Re: Lying Here Alone
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by arden on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 11:56:28 AM AEST
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i know what your feeling.. but you must go through the bad in life to get to the good. i liked this you are a very talented writer. keep it up id like to read more of your stuff.
Arden |
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