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My Old Hero
Contributed by
MnMnMsrcool
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Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 05:34:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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You were my hero
You were always there
But now, your just a zero
It's never really fair
You tried to turn your life around
But it didn't seem to work
When ever I saw your face you frowned
You were starting to become unhappy
I miss your smile, I miss you
I wish I could see your smile
I wish there was something I could do.
For a life that could have happened
For a life that was so fragile
so weak and so unloved
So Loved and so strong
I turned my back on you
But it was not long
Because you are my hero
Forever you will be too
Copyright ©
MnMnMsrcool
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2004-03-01 17:34:51]
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Re: My Old Hero
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by Ruby1987 on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 05:40:12 PM AEST
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heros can die and they'll still be heros.
i love this poem so much admiration in all that pain u c
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Re: My Old Hero
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 10:00:38 AM AEST
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an enjoyable read, very well done.
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