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Torture Thoughts
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
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Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 04:34:39 PM in AEST
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Every where I go, all I think is death.
Everything I see, all I think is depression.
I stare over the balcony,
I think of jumping off.
I find a piece of glass,
I try to slit my wrist.
I stare into a fire,
I think of the smell of my buring flesh.
Why must I be forced to continue,
when others are sickly, & look forward to living?
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2004-03-01 16:34:39]
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Re: Torture Thoughts
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by doug on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 04:41:26 PM AEST
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i once had these same thoughts and i admired people who were close to leaving this horrible world. i dont know why you dont like this piece cause i enjoyed it
your friend doug |
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Re: Torture Thoughts
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by desire on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 05:17:51 PM AEST
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| i like this alot...your thougts are thoughts im sure many have had at one time or another..its a good read..most often we are our own worst critics...its well done so dont worry.....slr |
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Re: Torture Thoughts
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by shelby on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 10:51:22 PM AEST
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honest emotions and feeling expressed in this poem nothing wrong with it I see only that your so sad dont give up for tomorrow is a new day and soon a better one with a colorful rainbow will be in your reach.
Michelle |
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