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U cant escape true love
Contributed by
SAT
on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 03:51:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The radiant beams of love
Shine down on her soul
And brighten her spirits
Leaving hr stripped
In front of true love
Soft, kind words
Leave her speechless
For she is a princess
Treated as a queen
Upon her thrown
As a target for discrace
In front of her own spirit
With the seul intention
Of discovering who she really is
Standing in front of herself
Faceless and Flawless
Staring, wanting for the best
Breathing deeply
Hopelessly trying
To escape herself
And her only true enemy
Trapped behind bars
Locked doors, no windows
Digging deep into her soul
Waiting for the end
Wishing for the best
And finally discovers it
True love.
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SAT
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2004-03-01 15:51:06]
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Re: U cant escape true love
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by doug on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 04:14:17 PM AEST
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| ahh love , sweet love . it is a joy to read your work and may you find love and happiness yourself. your friend doug |
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Re: U cant escape true love
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by faith_my_eyes on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 05:07:21 PM AEST
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| wonderful |
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Re: U cant escape true love
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 08:38:56 AM AEST
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| I loved this! Big smile here. The title drew my eye and I have to tell you this was fabulous. You are right you can't escape true love. You made my morning, thank you for sharing this. Kie |
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Re: U cant escape true love
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by SAT on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 06:28:31 PM AEST
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hey guys, thanx for commenting, i appreciate it! have a good one, and again, thanx!
alicia marie
~*SAT*~ |
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