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Fountain love Láska u fontány
Contributed by
Aika
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Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 03:46:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She was sitting on the edge of fountain
In a hot summer day
Her hands splashing ¨
In that cold fountain water
Long hair glittering
Softly sweat
Shadows in eyes disclosed
How tired they were
A stranger walked to her
He liked her a lot
Softly with his fingers
On her neck pouring water cold
And the beauty recovered
cast her eyes over him
and the beauty smiled
and sitting still on fountain
she let that boy
pouring water on
drop by drop washing out
sweat of her body hot
they spent together few hours
and the fact she was with him
love between them was born
and left the shadow of sadness
in the evening he took her in his arms
softly kissed her forehead
whispered sweetly in her ears
allow me to escort you to your flat
„allow me go with you
allow me kiss your hair
become my love
since today forever“
maybe it was dissemblance
maybe it was love at first sight
maybe it was just destiny
those two who had date at fountain
Seděla na okraji fontány,
V horký letní den,
Její ruce se máčely
V té vodě ledové
Dlouhé vlasy se třpytily
Lehce propocené
Stíny v očích prozradily
Jak jsou již znavené
Přistoupil k ní cizí kluk
Hrozně se mu líbila
Lehce jí prsty za krk
Vodu z fontány nalíval
A kráska pookřela
A kráska se usmála
Očima ho přejela
Na fontáně dál seděla
Nechala toho kluka
Aby jí dál vodou poléval
Kapka za kapkou smáčela
Pot z jejího těla
Byli spolu pár hodin
Jen to, že byla s ním
Láska se narodila v nich
A odešel smutku stín
K večeru vzal ji do náruče
Lehce na čelo políbil
Zašeptal do ouška sladce
Dovol, abych tě doprovodil
„dovol mi jít s tebou
nech mě políbit tvé vlasy
staň se mou láskou
ode dnes navždy
snad to bylo horka mámení
snad láska na první pohled
snad dávno byli si souzeni,
ti dva co u fontány měli rande
Copyright ©
Aika
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2004-03-01 15:46:11]
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Re: Fountain love Láska u fontány
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by doug on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 04:23:27 PM AEST
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| very sweet and lovely to read, i imagined myself on a summer day and saw the girl in my minds eye. anyways may you walk in peace and happiness your friend doug |
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Re: Fountain love Láska u fontány
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 05:57:57 PM AEST
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I like this one a lot. It has a very peaceful theme. Good job.
Andrew |
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Re: Fountain love Láska u fontány
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 06:34:00 PM AEST
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| oh, aika this is a beautiful love story poem!! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Fountain love Láska u fontány
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 05:30:36 AM AEST
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Oh Aika......this one was very special indeed!
A very romantic warm hearted love story by the fountain......and I love the ending because it was so happily ended with love between two people.......found at the fountain on a very hot day!
Lovely Aika.....you make the best romantic writes of anyone I know. Great story teller you are!
Loved it
love you too
consue |
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Re: Fountain love Láska u fontány
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by Merry on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 11:23:14 PM AEST
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a lovely write - I would so love to hear it read in your native language.
smiles
merry |
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Re: Fountain love Láska u fontány
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 10:32:09 AM AEST
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I can picture a fountain, shaped like a tree, its branches pouring a fine mist onto you as you smile beneath it.
Wonderful write from a wonderful dreamer |
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