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a picture of my life
Contributed by
kailadragon
on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 03:26:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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while thinking one night
lying in bed
i decided to paint for you
a picture of my life
I was told that God created
a mission for everyone's life
mine is hidden
in the shadows of the mists
unreachable
and reality strikes quickly
when friends are stolen away
teasing and harassment
will never stop
no matter what you do
then they wonder
why teenagers bring weapons to school
when everything was so "perfect"
why did they take their own life?
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kailadragon
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2004-03-01 15:26:28] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: a picture of my life
(User Rating: 1 ) by doug on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 03:34:30 PM AEST (User
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this poem i think made a good point at the end. i was harrassed and bullied in school and often thought of having a gun to defend myself. we wonder why the shootings happen. its because some bully has made that kids life in to a living hell. untill society wakes up and stops these bullies there will continue to be hatred and killing. a great poem with a great point. look forward tomore from you for you are obviously insightful.
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