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hope you're there
Contributed by
fallensilence
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Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 12:22:24 PM in AEST
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her words fall to the floor
as quickly as her tears
an almost inaudible whisper
that is so difficult to hear
i've been living with this pain
too long to remember that she's always there
(i hope you're there to understand )
that i have been lost in myself
to realize just how much she cares
her voice breaks through the silence, once more
"i love you"
she screams but it might as well be a whisper
i'm too far gone to ever hear her
i slip away quietly but will always have this memory of her to hold onto
i'm cold now but there's nothing she can do
we were searching so long for each other
she had found me but i could never quite see her
now here i turn stone white
she says to save my breathe for another day
but it was spent with my own reply:
"i love you too"
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Re: hope you're there
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by arden on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 12:32:36 PM AEST
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really good write. i enjoyed it. keep it up.
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Re: hope you're there
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by a_bear on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 01:51:19 PM AEST
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| this made me cry....it's beautiful |
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Re: hope you're there
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 05:48:46 PM AEST
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wow that was so sweet... so beautiful... you are really talented fallen. i really enjoy reading your poetry. thank you for sharing.
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